cause and affect

This week we had to do a cause and effect sheet, you had to put the letter of the answer that matched up. We did this because we are starting argument writing. 

Identity Poem

This week we had to make identity poems. We had the choice of poem 1, 2, and 3. I picked poem 1 for my identity poem. This is what I made and I hope you like it and please leave some feed back.s

Descriptive Writing

WALT:  Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interest to our readers

My paragraph

I was kidnaped and taken into an abandoned Warehouse. I was scared,
my teeth were chattering. I was tied up on the chair with the light
beaming down on me. It had graffiti on the walls.
I saw them walking in I couldn't get a clear sight of them but I knew they were
bad. There was three of them. They were wearing bandanas, my first look at them I thought they were desert people but they weren’t I took a closer look
and realised they were iran terrorists that kidnaped me. I was so scared.
They put me at gunpoint but they did not shoot me I was lucky. They took the
handkerchief out of my mouth and made me tell them the truth.                                       THE END

                                                     

SELF ASSESSMENT

To work on :

I need to work on making my punctuation better and in better places.

Things that i have done well :

I have made the story more interesting in more places.

Peer assessment

I liked it and it was interesting. It was also a bit short  

By George

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