Kia ora George, I could imagine your car trip and arrival at your special place. I have been to Haanahs Clearing only once and loved the area. My aunty once taught at the school there many years ago so I was pleased to take photos for her of my visit. Your might like to add photos of some of your adventures You have organised your thoughts and paragraphed your writing well.
Hey George, Rhys here from T1. Wow george this is a nice piece of writing, I like how you included every aspect of your trip to Hannahs Clearing. Maybe next time you could have included some similes or maybe some adjectives. How often do you go to Hannahs Clearing? Stay safe!
Hi George Thank you for sharing your special place with us. What an amazing part of New Zealand is Hannah's Clearing and the rest of deep South Westland. Nothing better than a feast of fresh fish and chips from the caravan at Jackson's Bay.
Kia ora George, I could imagine your car trip and arrival at your special place. I have been to Haanahs Clearing only once and loved the area. My aunty once taught at the school there many years ago so I was pleased to take photos for her of my visit. Your might like to add photos of some of your adventures You have organised your thoughts and paragraphed your writing well.
ReplyDeleteHey George, Rhys here from T1. Wow george this is a nice piece of writing, I like how you included every aspect of your trip to Hannahs Clearing. Maybe next time you could have included some similes or maybe some adjectives. How often do you go to Hannahs Clearing? Stay safe!
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Hi George
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your special place with us. What an amazing part of New Zealand is Hannah's Clearing and the rest of deep South Westland. Nothing better than a feast of fresh fish and chips from the caravan at Jackson's Bay.
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Hello George, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you told us about your journey there and how you unpacked everything.
This reminds me of when I went to Hanmer springs with my grandma and my cousin.
To improve, you could say what you like doing in that place.
Why is that place so special to you?
Cya later George, keep it up!
-Amelia