Descriptive Writing

WALT:  Use precise adjectives in our writing to add interest to our readers

My paragraph

I was kidnaped and taken into an abandoned Warehouse. I was scared,
my teeth were chattering. I was tied up on the chair with the light
beaming down on me. It had graffiti on the walls.
I saw them walking in I couldn't get a clear sight of them but I knew they were
bad. There was three of them. They were wearing bandanas, my first look at them I thought they were desert people but they weren’t I took a closer look
and realised they were iran terrorists that kidnaped me. I was so scared.
They put me at gunpoint but they did not shoot me I was lucky. They took the
handkerchief out of my mouth and made me tell them the truth.                                       THE END

                                                     

SELF ASSESSMENT

To work on :

I need to work on making my punctuation better and in better places.

Things that i have done well :

I have made the story more interesting in more places.

Peer assessment

I liked it and it was interesting. It was also a bit short  

By George

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Matariki Kite Day

Today we made kites with a friend. I chose my friend called Hunter and we made this kite. We used cellophane, insulation tape, sellotape and paper. We made the kites about Matariki. The whole school is having a celebration about Matariki stars today at 10 past 11. 

Submarines

Walt: to use descriptive writing.


This term M1 literacy group are learning to use descriptive writing and trying to re write what we are reading about in our book called the cay. This is one of our reading task. We had different word that we had to pick one and write the meaning of it and I chose submarine because it had the most information about it.  

this week it was book week and this is my work that i did

Discriptive sentence writing week 2

                                                             

                                                                            Nikau palm writing

For the last few days we have been learning about Nikau palm trees. 

            

Meet me - Week 4

Hi, I'm George. I'm looking forward to 2018 in Mamaku.  My goal this year is to get better at maths. 

I have three siblings, 2 sisters and 1 brother. My whole extended family is in England.

I look forward to reading your comments.

Tell me one thing you are looking forward to in 2018.

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