Boy In The Striped Pajamas Diary

This term we are reading the boy in the striped pajamas. For that we have activities to do about the book. One of the activities was to create a diary coming form the main character (Bruno) this is what i wrote as the diary. This is my diary.

Dear diary its Bruno

I have moved houses from Berlin to this place. I don't like this place because i don't have my best friends Carl Daniel and Martin but I didn't have a choice what we were doing. Mother says it's for Fathers job (which I'm still not sure what he does) but I have made a shocking discovery and I'm not sure how I am meant  to feel about it. I was walking around the new house  trying to find some new places and then I found a window. As I looked out the window I saw people but not normal people, they looked odd. They were very skinny and they were injured and most of them were being yelled at by soldiers in uniform. They were dirty like they have never been in a bath in their life and they were in grey and white pajamas  they were in striped pajamas and they  looked sad and scared anyway i showed gretel she thinks they are doing a play but i don’t i'm not sure what i feel is going on buts its not normal ...